第 1 句因包含“骑鹤,云”,据此推断可能引用了典故:骑鹤
第 4 句因包含“司命”,据此推断可能引用了典故:司命
译《鲁拜集》 其三十一 现当代 · 黄克孙
七言绝句 押灰韵
骑鹤神游阿母台,七重天阙云来
玉皇仙籍偷观尽,司命天书不开
注:Up from Earth's Centre through the Seventh Gate
I rose, and on the Throne of Saturn sate,
And many a Knot unravel'd by the Road;
But not the Master-knot of Human Fate.